How to answer “why law/why commercial law” on a training contract/vacation scheme application
You may have seen my previous article on how to write a bad answer to this question.
Now here’s a good example:
Having enjoyed commercial law modules at university, I undertook virtual finance and m&a courses on Forage, where the detail-orientated nature of the work appealed. Although I liked the commercial nature of these courses, it was the legal aspects that most interested me, including reviewing share purchase agreements and completion documents. I consequently attended City law firm insight events, where I enjoyed learning how lawyers assist businesses in navigating the law to meet their commercial objectives. It became clear that a career as a commercial solicitor was at the intersection of my core interests: law, finance and business. Consequently, I obtained more legal-centric roles: an internship at a commercial law firm and as a volunteer at a university law clinic. In these roles, I enjoyed working in teams, the business focus and client-facing elements, as well as the analytical aspects of conducting industry research for a new client, problem solving a dispute between a pro bono client and a phone operator, and reviewing a complex commercial lease. These experiences cemented my desire to pursue a career as a commercial solicitor.
This answer works well because it:
Tells a story. The candidate is taking the reader on a journey, from university up to the present. It shows how one experience led them to the next, setting out logically why they want to be a commercial lawyer.
Provides evidence. The candidate has drawn on a wide range of experience to explain his motivation for a career in law. They talk about their studies, virtual work experience, insight events, in-person work experience and volunteering.
It’s not skills led. You’ll notice that skills are mentioned but only as an after thought and to expand on their motivations/experiences - the focus in this answer is very much on their journey and the things they’ve done to convince themselves that a legal career is for them.
Is concise. Remember: a law firm is interested in both what you write and how you write. Being concise matters.
Shows commitment to a legal career. This answer tells a firm that the candidate is not only interested in commercial law but they’ve shown commitment to the career by getting experience through various means over a period of time.
Final takeaway: Look out for nuances. Make sure you answer the question. For example, if the question is asking you why do you want a career in commercial law, that’s slightly (but not very) different to why do you want to work at a City law firm. Make sure you adapt your answer accordingly.